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Tuesday, February 12

  1. msg Feedback from digital health and wellness message posted Feedback from digital health and wellness Not sure if only "2008" as a citation in the first paragraph is a correct citation. The…
    Feedback from digital health and wellness
    Not sure if only "2008" as a citation in the first paragraph is a correct citation.
    There should be more resources under Learn more. Your definition and overview looks good, as well as your videos and resources.
    10:37 am
  2. msg Feedback from Digital Communication message posted Feedback from Digital Communication - Definition and description were very clear. Format was easy to read. -Very informational and ea…
    Feedback from Digital Communication
    - Definition and description were very clear. Format was easy to read.
    -Very informational and easy to navigate.
    -Video pertains to the topic well, but isn't very informative.
    -We are interested in knowing how you decided to use the three subtopics that you did.
    -The quiz does a great job of covering the information discussed on the page.
    -The references were formatted very nicely, and resources were applicable to a specific subject area.
    10:29 am
  3. msg Feedback from Digital Etiquette message posted Feedback from Digital Etiquette -Good job of using in-text citations. -Good use of video, but make directions bold, italic, or all…
    Feedback from Digital Etiquette
    -Good job of using in-text citations.
    -Good use of video, but make directions bold, italic, or all caps so that it is noticeable to reader. We didn't see it at first.
    -Put resources for teachers and kids above the references.
    -Computer Parts game and my pop studio look like fun ways for younger students to learn computer parts. Great tools to use in an elementary classroom!
    -Answers were already in the quiz, may want to fix that
    -Good job on references, would put them below resources for teachers and kids.
    -Layout is clear, may want a little more spacing in the learn more section with the videos.
    10:26 am
  4. msg Resources for Teachers and Kids message posted Resources for Teachers and Kids It is helpful for the resources to be differentiated under a header for either teachers or kids. Th…
    Resources for Teachers and Kids
    It is helpful for the resources to be differentiated under a header for either teachers or kids. The title of the links doesn't always tell us whether it is a resource for a child or teacher. Resources look good.
    10:26 am
  5. msg Feedback From Digital Security message posted Feedback From Digital Security Overview: I thought the overview was good. You gave a very brief summery of what Digital Commerc…
    Feedback From Digital Security
    Overview:

    I thought the overview was good. You gave a very brief summery of what Digital Commerce was and a succinct description of the problems that arise in Digital Commerce. There was a couple typos that you should check for. Maybe give more information about how digital commerce is growing in our society and becoming more important.

    Learn More:

    I thought you provided good links in the learn more section. I thought the video was good, although it was only talking. I might suggest to add maybe one more link.

    Resources:

    I really liked the resources you provided. You provided two lesson plans for teachers as well as a game for students.

    References:

    The references all appear to be there and formatted correctly.

    Digital Law:

    Followed the requirements:

    Misc/Format:

    Table of Contents/ overall format looked good.

    Show what you know:

    The Quiz was an excellent summary of the information you provided and from your resources.
    10:25 am
  6. msg Feedback from Digital Commerce message posted Feedback from Digital Commerce A really great wiki overall. Was a lot of fun to look through and learned a lot.The definition and …
    Feedback from Digital Commerce
    A really great wiki overall. Was a lot of fun to look through and learned a lot.The definition and overview of digital etiquette are very informative, but we felt that they may just be a little too lengthy, but it was cited perfectly. The learn more section including the video were very strong in your wiki, but maybe have a little less space between your first too sections, just to prevent lots of scrolling. We were unable to take your quiz, and would like to. The resources were great, but we felt that the more safety rules for kids might be a little hard to integrate into a classroom. Well formatted.
    10:22 am
  7. msg Feedback from Digital Health and Wellness message posted Feedback from Digital Health and Wellness Quiz content and questions looks good other than the answers being filled in already.
    Feedback from Digital Health and Wellness
    Quiz content and questions looks good other than the answers being filled in already.
    10:21 am
  8. msg Digital Access Feedback message posted Digital Access Feedback You provided an excellent definition and overview of digital access. We appreciated that you incorp…
    Digital Access Feedback
    You provided an excellent definition and overview of digital access. We appreciated that you incorporated how it works into the classroom as well as the overall definition.

    Your section 'Learn More' provided excellent sources of information about digital access although you may want to consider using a shorter video.

    The section 'Show What You Know' had great questions but we suggest having a background theme to make the quiz seem more appealing/ engaging.

    Your section for 'Resources for Teachers & Kids' did a good job of offering information to both the teacher and students but the top link did not work so it may be useful to go back and correct that issue.

    Your 'References' were in correct format and connected to everything you had on the page. Good job.
    10:20 am
  9. msg Feedback from Digital Literacy message posted Feedback from Digital Literacy Definition and overview seem to be clear and to the point as well as full of good information. The…
    Feedback from Digital Literacy
    Definition and overview seem to be clear and to the point as well as full of good information. The learn more section is clear with links to more information as well as an informative video. The quiz looks very good, look out for a minor typo on one of the question's answers. The answer is written a an c and it should be a AND c. Resources are great and have some good hands on activities to provide more learning. References should be formatted to APA style. There were no in text citations, which may want to be looked over just to ensure that your not ripping off some guys information as your own. Table of contents and video looks good. Formatting the layout was good but the font and size seemed to change, may want to make that uniform as well as capitalization and punctuation error such in your bulleted statements. overall nice work!
    10:20 am
  10. msg Feedback from Digital Access message posted Feedback from Digital Access Everything was really good-your links were great resources, tips were helpful. However, the digit…
    Feedback from Digital Access
    Everything was really good-your links were great resources, tips were helpful.
    However, the digital quiz would not open. Also the references you gave need a web address included for APA style.
    Good job!
    10:20 am

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